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 Playable Model WIP (Critique welcome!)

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venw0lf

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PostSubject: Playable Model WIP (Critique welcome!)   Sat Jul 22, 2017 4:06 pm

Hey y'all, I've been working on a playable model recently and here are the results.

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The last tail there is my favorite, as it's a tail with bands around it. The color of the bands is controlled by the tailtip color!

I will start making heads for the model soon, then I will rig and animate!
Also- feel free to critique my work! I'm always looking for ways to improve.
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chevy_cheetah

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Game username : chevy_cheetah(chevrolet)
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PostSubject: Re: Playable Model WIP (Critique welcome!)   Sat Jul 22, 2017 5:36 pm

That looks so cute keep up the great work!
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Malkabre

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PostSubject: Re: Playable Model WIP (Critique welcome!)   Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:11 pm

Model looks neat so far, I like how the snout seems to be up in a permanent snarl. Though I'm not a
fan of the untextured, cartoony fur to it I'm sure a texture can be imported onto it as well as onto
the game, also to me the neck looks a bit too long. As for the tails they look well made, my favorite
would have to be the rat-like and wolf-like tail.
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ObeyTheFist

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PostSubject: Re: Playable Model WIP (Critique welcome!)   Sun Jul 23, 2017 11:22 am

Looks very good!

If I had to nitpick something I would say the shape of the forehead bothers me... it seems a bit too, I dunno, rounded? Like it should be flatter?

Here, this pic shows what I mean - even the rounder heads are a bit flat and the ears much lower in relation:



I like your model, that one part just seems a little off to me. ^^;
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